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Thursday, July 7, 2016

Riccarton House

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Riccarton House


When I was walking quietly in the mansion I was scared.Then I heard a screech noise, I felt cold inside the mansion. I looked behind me and it was nobody. So I looked inside the big and small rooms and there was nobody again. I heard another screech noise and it was coming from the squeaky wooden stairs so I crept down the wooden stairs.


Nobody was down there, then I heard something go past me. I was so scared I think it was a friendly ghost maybe it was Jane Deans because she had died in the mansion.  So I ran out of the mansion and I locked the  wooden doors.  


I felt really scared and I never wanted to go back in the house again.

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora, thank you Reagan for your comment, yes this story is made up but my class and I heard there was a real ghost inside Riccarton House named jane deans.

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