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Friday, August 12, 2016

Cristiano Ronaldo

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I went to football match and bonked heads with
Cristiano Ronaldo then I woke up and feeling
different I looked around. I was in a mansion
and I said to myself this isn't my house. I looked in the mirror and I screamed aaaaaaaaaaaaa .I ran down the stairs and a lady gave me some keys.I opened the door to the garage and I jumped in the shiny red car. I went back and crashed it. I drove to a football game and then I saw Cristiano Ronaldo.Then someone kicked the ball then Cristiano Ronaldo was running to get the ball. Next I started to run. Then we bonked heads again and er went back to normal. Then I smelled bacon and eggs.       

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