Wednesday, May 24, 2017

Titanium slow writing

WALT use a technique to carefully craft our writing

If I stayed in my warm home, if I didn't blow a fuse,  if I stayed in class ,then this wouldn't have happened. I was Scared and terrified and I was afraid . A piece of wood came down and there was a crack in the wall. I was in a big corridor. Quickly I ran  and hurriedly I scrunched my hair.It was as cold as ice; my hands were shaking; my palms were all sweaty. I had to escape.

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