Thursday, April 13, 2017

Beyond the Lines

WALT write a narrative through the eyes of one of the children or one of the soldiers.
Beyond the Lines this is the video

                     Beyond the Lines

I am on the boat and i'm really scared and cramped and everyone is scared too. Suddenly the ramp goes down everyone started to run with there guns. The mud was as brown as wood and lots of people had died already and the blood was as red as a rose.

I was still running and suddenly my friends were dying. I got a bandage and put it over the bullet hole and there was lots of blood too. He was crying and he gave me his note that he was going to give to his mum and asked me to pass it on.  I said  “yes” then he died. I was crying and I was really sad.   

Friday, April 7, 2017

The cloud

The cloud

I am just a normal person walking then suddenly a cloud shocked  me and I turn into a cloud I was freaking out and I could not talk.
Then I heard a noise he said

“You were chosen to be a spy and help people with crime and take care of the town.”

But there was no crime at all but suddenly someone stole something and someone started a fire. So I went to the fire and put some water on it to stop the fire. Then I went to the crime I electric shock the guy and he fell down to the ground. The police officer handcuffed him and put him in jail everyone was cheering for me because I stop tow bad thing. The guy that started the fire got put in jail too because he could've killed someone.