Whale Fantasia.

Hi my name is big Henry they call me that because I am the biggest whale in the Pacific ocean. I was just swimming with my whale friends we were telling jokes and stuff.

Suddenly I saw a boat it had some spears they were hunters. So me and my friends swam away. But my best friend got caught, his name was Frank.

I went back to help him but the hunters caught him before I could help him I was so sad. Suddenly I saw some humans they were dancing in the water for some reason so I started to dance too. They were touching me so I said “get away from me.” It was a lot of fun we danced for 20 minutes I left the humans that I didn’t know.I swam away I said goodbye but I don't think they understood me.

Suddenly the best thing happen to me.  I saw Frank he had cuts on his face and some bruises and it looked like he had a broken tail. So I helped him up and took him to the whale hospital. The whale nurse took him into the room where they are gonna put him into a coma to do some surgery.

I waited for an hour and then the whale nurse came and she had good news and some bad news. I said “Can I have the good news please.” She said “Frank is still alive but the bad news is he has a broken tail and a broken fin so he won't be able to swim.” I was so sad I went to the room that he was in and said “unlucky bro.”

He was asleep so he didn’t hear me. I went out of the room that he was in, I didn’t know what I went in there for, just to see him properly.

A year has gone by and Frank is ok he can swim again. THE END

Titanium slow writing

WALT use a technique to carefully craft our writing

If I stayed in my warm home, if I didn't blow a fuse,  if I stayed in class ,then this wouldn't have happened. I was Scared and terrified and I was afraid . A piece of wood came down and there was a crack in the wall. I was in a big corridor. Quickly I ran  and hurriedly I scrunched my hair.It was as cold as ice; my hands were shaking; my palms were all sweaty. I had to escape.

Somalia

I am a big robot and I am sleeping in my container with some more robots. Suddenly I heard a noisy but I didn’t get up because I was too tired to get up but some more robots heard it and got up and saying “What is that noise?” I said

“Don't worry about it” Then I heard people coming over. So we got out of the  container and hid. Then the people come over and opened the container. They said “Where are they?” We went thro the escape hole and then I touch his back and he got scared for some reason.

I'm just a robot, then all of the robots got out from the place they were hiding from and then they started to fight the pirates. The pirates were fighting back but we were winning. I went to the captain I touch his back and pointed out side he was really shocked then I knocked him out with my metal fist then we went back to sleep.         

Beyond the Lines

WALT write a narrative through the eyes of one of the children or one of the soldiers.

Beyond the Lines this is the video

                     Beyond the Lines

I am on the boat and i'm really scared and cramped and everyone is scared too. Suddenly the ramp goes down everyone started to run with there guns. The mud was as brown as wood and lots of people had died already and the blood was as red as a rose.

I was still running and suddenly my friends were dying. I got a bandage and put it over the bullet hole and there was lots of blood too. He was crying and he gave me his note that he was going to give to his mum and asked me to pass it on.  I said  “yes” then he died. I was crying and I was really sad.