Rio rainforest

I am a black panther getting ready to race I am  fast as a car I am strong as metal. I stub my toes into the hard brown grown and the grass tickles my black legs. I am black as the night sky and my eyes are yellow as the bright sun.Then I put my bum up in the sky to get ready to race then I race theory the green bush then I saw a snake on the tree and I saw a cheetah next to me and I was just beating him.

Then I saw the finish line so I sprinted to the finish line and I won and then I changed back into a human and I saw everybody too.

It's not a planet, it's my home.

WALT use adjectives and correct punctuation.

I am dreaming and I am excited and I can't wait to see my family and my brother and sister.But I am scared to see planet earth and I hope my home is still there.But I am gonna miss space and my rocket smells really really old. I touch my rocket ship for the first time then I heard a meteor past me.I am hungry because I haven't had in a long time. I can tell my story to my family.I hope they like it. I am going really really fast and my heart is pumping like a really fast rocket ship. I finally landed I  stepped out of my rocket ship. I look around and there were  rubbish on the ground and gun  bullets the building were broken down I was so so so sad.