Thursday, April 13, 2017

Beyond the Lines

WALT write a narrative through the eyes of one of the children or one of the soldiers.
Beyond the Lines this is the video

                     Beyond the Lines

I am on the boat and i'm really scared and cramped and everyone is scared too. Suddenly the ramp goes down everyone started to run with there guns. The mud was as brown as wood and lots of people had died already and the blood was as red as a rose.

I was still running and suddenly my friends were dying. I got a bandage and put it over the bullet hole and there was lots of blood too. He was crying and he gave me his note that he was going to give to his mum and asked me to pass it on.  I said  “yes” then he died. I was crying and I was really sad.   

Friday, April 7, 2017

The cloud

The cloud

I am just a normal person walking then suddenly a cloud shocked  me and I turn into a cloud I was freaking out and I could not talk.
Then I heard a noise he said

“You were chosen to be a spy and help people with crime and take care of the town.”

But there was no crime at all but suddenly someone stole something and someone started a fire. So I went to the fire and put some water on it to stop the fire. Then I went to the crime I electric shock the guy and he fell down to the ground. The police officer handcuffed him and put him in jail everyone was cheering for me because I stop tow bad thing. The guy that started the fire got put in jail too because he could've killed someone.

Friday, March 31, 2017

Tom Trueheart

Tom Trueheart
I am a small boy named Tom I am small like a thumb because an evil wizard turned me so small I was so angry. Anyways Here is my pet bird he’s really cool because he can do tricks like go throw a hoop and other cool stuff. Oh No it's the wizard that turned me so small I hide under the bed and I ben quit the wizard was looking for me but he didn't find me but he took my family into the forest and into his castle. I was scared to go in there but i'm small.I had a plan to get my 6 brothers I can fly my bird to the evil wizard castle as I walked to my pet bird I saw light from a distinct it was really shiny so I walked to it and it was a magical silver sword.I picked it up and I took it inside and I put it in a case to protect it and I took it with me. I jumped on my bird and I got some food it was yummy because it was KFC I had fried chicken and some spicy chicken the chicken was creche as a chip.I dropped some on my bird and he ate it all I was really angry because it was the best bit anyways me and my bird flyed out of the house. I was scared because the snow was really heavy and I said I will go tomorrow but my bird did not listen then a leaf fell down I said AAAAAA!!!!!!!! but my bird doge it. Then I saw the  castle it had guards protecting but me and my pet bird flyed over them then the other guards saw me they were trying to shot me with there crossbow but my bird doge them then I got my sword out and my bird got close to them and I swiped them they were dead. I saw my brothers in a cage so I went down there and I saw a keyhole so need a key to open the cage but the wizard had it he was a sleep so I had a chance to get the key. I went in side of his room and the key was next to him so I need to be quiet. I tiptoe to his bed and I took his key I was nervous and it was small key too I went the cage and I unlocked it and they were free. I jumped back on my pet bird and flyed a way and my 6 brothers ran very fast they were tired but I didn't care.As I was flying my pet bird my bird was hungry lucky I berg some KFC chicken THE END.  

Spitting to survive

Friday, March 24, 2017

Thursday, March 23, 2017

Arctic Circle

  WALT Vary my sentence beginnings, structure and length.

As I turned my handle a fresh juicy apple popped out. I grabbed it and I ate it all it was very yummy suddenly a mystery box came out of nowhere. I touch it and it gave me magical powers and I was freaking out and I accidentally touched the tree. The tree had grow lots of juicy apples so I took some apples and bite through it just in case. It was pretty good so I looked at the box and I said “come here” but it didn't respond and the light box was moving.So I chased it but the box was still moving away. So I ran in front of it and I caught it and I was so happy because I can have apples for days.But suddenly my feet turn into glowing orange blocks I was really scared because I was going to die.Then my other half turn into blocks too then my head turn into a block.

Camouflaged animals

WALT find and use relevant parts of the text to help us answer questions accurately.