Kia ora Mikaere I'm Summer from mumku hub at grey main school. Wow I think that is a very amazing super hero I wish he was real. You have done very well you have told me what it does. Your drawing is really cool but I think the picture look a little scary.
Kia Ora Mikaere I really like this Idea for a blog post I think that writing about a super hero and describing him is a really cool Idea. This reminded me of Percy Jackson! You could possibly work on your writing and punctuation. Ka Pai (Good Work!) From Jessie
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Kia ora Mikaere I'm Summer from mumku hub at grey main school. Wow I think that is a very amazing super hero I wish he was real. You have done very well you have told me what it does. Your drawing is really cool but I think the picture look a little scary.
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ReplyDeleteI really like this Idea for a blog post I think that writing about a super hero and describing him is a really cool Idea. This reminded me of Percy Jackson! You could possibly work on your writing and punctuation.
Ka Pai (Good Work!)
From Jessie